Myst by Harman

Categories: English Blog

 

As I looked in the bright summer’s day two birds flew in the bright sunny sky and then as I looked there I saw a lonely deserted place and battered rocks. When I looked down there was the lovely shing steps and then I saw the beautiful flowers growing in the charming garden.

Comments

  1. Comment left by Miss Kenney at 22:32:37 on Nov 17, 2009

    Well done, Harman, this is a really good piece of writing. You have used a lot of good descriptions and fabulous vocabulary.

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